tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post687444225273595343..comments2023-10-30T16:56:20.700+08:00Comments on Novella~My LovE: Novella~My LovE 24KaNaFeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15562572349757978272noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-82199872658525256302009-06-12T01:22:57.548+08:002009-06-12T01:22:57.548+08:00hmm sape kata cite ni x syok.
ak rs cite ni best j...hmm sape kata cite ni x syok.<br />ak rs cite ni best jer.<br />comel.<br />cool pon ade.<br /><br />ak cume comment ap yg ak rs je. <br />trpulang la pd dia atai utk sapa2 utk menilai. \<br />ak mmg x reti berlkarya atau tulis novel mcm kanafee. ak cume reti membaca jer.<br /><br />hmm. tu je. jgn sempitkn pemikiran.<br />x smestinye kene kd positive coomr=ent jek kn.<br /><br />hmm.<br /><br />to kanafee.<br />cite u mmg best.<br />kadang2 rs mcm tgk cite drama korea pon ade. sbb tu sy boleh habiskn bc sume series awk semalaman tanpa tido.<br /><br />hmm. bile dh abis cm bengang. bile nk smbg lagi. huhu. bile duk sensorang, igt balik part2 dlm ni boleh sengih sensorang. hehe.<br /><br />tu je r.<br /><br />x ley komen byk2.<br />nanti pminat awk mrh.<br />kayh. peace.<br /><br /><br />ps- cpt2 smbg.<br />work hard! chaiyok!Akuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12499576666052935527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-7644864652352080482009-06-11T23:04:01.935+08:002009-06-11T23:04:01.935+08:00ak rsa grammr dia ok pe..
ape sal ngan ko..
if ko ...ak rsa grammr dia ok pe..<br />ape sal ngan ko..<br />if ko rsa citer ni x syok..blah la awal2..<br />ak rsa pgunaan BI tu ok je...<br /><br />ape2 pn citer ni mmg syok..<br />to kanafee pdulikn kata2 org x tahu erti bkarya..huhu..<br />keep it up..<br />i love u=)Zeni Gebahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05655583349588108222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-66344508355592923912009-06-11T01:19:37.517+08:002009-06-11T01:19:37.517+08:00hmm..
br abis baca semua series yang awk dh buat.
...hmm..<br />br abis baca semua series yang awk dh buat.<br />Komen:<br />- Cerita memang menarik and best<br /><br />Cuma ada kelemahan yang agak ketara<br /><br />- penggunaan bahasa Inggeris.Penggunaannnya macam pelik. Then guna bahasa kamus. Bila baca ayat English, mcm baca ayat BM yg di translate bulat-bulat ke BI. <br />Then ayat yang dibuat macam bukan ayat communication biasa. ntah. rasa cam weird.<br />Grammar pon kalo boleh perbetulkan.<br /><br />But its ok. Kalau awk nak guna ayat English ke apa, minta pendapat org yg pro ttg ayat-ayat english yg digunakan dlm communication. And jgn translate bulat-bulat bm ke bi. so ayat tu akan jd pelik tersangat.<br /><br /><br />Ms first-first bc mcm x best ( ni bc dr siri 1) mayb sbb pngolahan yg kurang menarik.<br />Tapi apa yg sy nampak, penulis semakin memperbaharui mutu gaya penulisan.<br />Teruskan usaha<br /><br /><br />ps- asal ayat ak skema sgt ni. huhu. sowi. byk komen.Akuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12499576666052935527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-19770687996049714302009-06-10T13:53:43.892+08:002009-06-10T13:53:43.892+08:00aaah! ak rse baik dynaz pilih denn!S or henneY..
...aaah! ak rse baik dynaz pilih denn!S or henneY..<br /><br />tp ,jgnlh haR!Z...Kiki Zarimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12114060713430782097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-45738714001655438672009-06-09T21:38:12.046+08:002009-06-09T21:38:12.046+08:00btol2..
sokong2..
nk naz ngn dennis..
dennis da ad...btol2..<br />sokong2..<br />nk naz ngn dennis..<br />dennis da ader rse da tuh..<br />naz still tataw lagi..<br />huhu...keSENGALan teserlah..https://www.blogger.com/profile/04994608325798990646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-17636051973580076762009-06-09T09:46:18.753+08:002009-06-09T09:46:18.753+08:00dennis, jgn lah lepaskan dynaz!dennis, jgn lah lepaskan dynaz!whoah.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00246620537610095064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5780905051009581741.post-74685664394530409782009-06-07T04:05:25.741+08:002009-06-07T04:05:25.741+08:00haha..dennis..dennis..da syg tu..ngaku je la..ego ...haha..dennis..dennis..da syg tu..ngaku je la..ego tol..huhu..nti bile naz da mulekn rncgn die kt hariz..bru dennis tau erti jeles..huhu..nak naz ngn dennis..!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com